Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
137,525 Literary Works • 672,040 Reviews
Rachel!
Thanks for posting the link
Seriously, please, don't cut it out. I really enjoyed her and her humourous ways. I liked how it tied in with Sheukki also, nicely done.
I don't notice anything different with your style. Maybe this character is just much different from the rest. But I like her. Very much so. I liked the interaction between her and the captain. Very nicely done.
Sorry I wasn't more help, but you don't give me much to work with, friend. Besides encouraging you to continue, I'm pretty useless as a reviewer. Ah well, I'm enjoying the ride.
Tanya