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Rachael!
I'm not only here to make it obvious how useless I am at critiquing your writing, but to let you know that I still love this!
I feel so bad because I'm not critiquing or anything... It makes me feel so blahish. I doubt you want to hear a load of OMG! I luv thisss like loooads!!!!!!! comments, so yeah... I'm sorry. I hope you don't mind too much.
Basically, just keep doing what you're doing, and maybe request a review from someone who's really harsh and notices things so easily, they're weirdos, or something.
Keep writing, and Merry Christmas!
xoxo Skinnykins.
Gotta love those elves!
Seriously, thanks for posting. But I've found no nitpicks. I'm useless :'(
I love your story and your writing style. Your characters are unique, but I've already told you that. I love this world you've created. Really love it.
I'm sorry I don't have anything else to add. But, you're just that awesome .
Tanya