Merely a Feeling of Confusion

I absolutely loved this! Amazing job my dear I can relate to some of this very easily and the description was beautifully done. All in all this is a very lovely write. Great job and good luck on your future writes.

I loved this.

Love is an illusion,
Merely a feeling of confusion.
It slowly and silently,
Sneaks its way in. #FF0000 ">I love these first two lines, as well. And the rhyming scheme you have going on here is awesome.

You're showered in radiance,
Bathed in pictures of light.
A facade of happiness
Overcomes your whole being. #FF0000 ">This last line kind of throws off the whole stanza.

And with that happiness
There comes a price.
The imagined feelings #FF0000 ">Comma
Contort and change. #FF0000 ">This stanza kind of loses all the rhyming scheme in it.

Love is an illusion,
Merely a feeling of confusion.
It sneaks up behind you
And takes you by surprise. #FF0000 ">I love these last two lines.

Try not to fall,
You'll just end up hurt.
Try not to succumb,
You'll just end up torn. #FF0000 ">Once again, the rhyming scheme. It just seems a bit off here, though I really do like this stanza.

Bathed in darkness,
Shadowed and stained;
A picture of evidence;
The trial of damnation. #FF0000 ">At this point, the whole rhyming thing is out the window, but I don't mind. It doesn't really need a rhyming scheme, the words just dance off the tongue.

Love is an illusion,
Merely a feeling of confusion.
More and more,
It has nothing to do with me.