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Yay!
I really like this next part!
The description is good, and the characters are evolving nicely! It's way better than the first chapter!
Keep it up.
I did notice some grammar mistakes, but i don't remember what they were!
Can't wait to read the next part!
~Rogue Jedi Master Timea