Thanks, Pyxis. I'll keep that in mind. The names i'm using right now probably are not going to be the ones i'm going to end up using, but i'll keep a few of them. Thanks for the advice. I'll definatly keep posting my work!
Thanks, Pyxis. I'll keep that in mind. The names i'm using right now probably are not going to be the ones i'm going to end up using, but i'll keep a few of them. Thanks for the advice. I'll definatly keep posting my work!
I really liked this-
the plot seems promising
My only problem is the name Deski-it just doesn't seem like it would fit into the time frame.
There are some minor problems, but if you read through you should find them.
Keep writing this. It's great!
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