You've got me under your spell
And we're riding towards hell;
There's no turning back, though I'm not sure I'd want to.
Hey, you break all the rules.
Babe, you act a damn fool,
But there's something there, something brilliant about you.
I don't know
If I can
Take this shit
Anymore.
But you keep me coming back, your enigma pulls me in.
When I'm with you
I see the stars explode
Beyond the reach of reality.
When I'm with you
I feel my heart being ruined
As you're standing in front of me.
When I'm with you
I know you bring me down,
But it feels like I'm falling free.
When I'm with you --
You're fucked up and you're cruel,
But that's the way it's supposed to be.
Tonight I'm walking on air;
I pray that's something we share,
As we joke and laugh and I fall deeper for you.
Then you leave me without word
Imagining I have heard
That you said you loved me and I said I did too.
I don't know
If you did
If I would,
But I can.
And you keep me coming back, your enigma pulls me in.
When I'm with you
I see the stars explode
Beyond the reach of reality.
When I'm with you
I feel my heart being ruined
As you're standing in front of me.
When I'm with you
I know you bring me down,
But it feels like I'm falling free.
When I'm with you --
You're fucked up and you're cruel,
But that's the way it's supposed to be.
When I'm with you
I can't see myself for the light.
When I'm with you
Life just seems a worthless fight.
When I'm with you
I'm about to let go and just fall.
When I'm with you
None of that seems to matter at all.
You'll be there;
I'll be there too.
You're my air
And I want you.
You'll ruin me,
But I don't fucking care --
I just want to let go
And be
Just me.
When I'm with you
I see the stars explode
Beyond the reach of reality.
When I'm with you
I feel my heart being ruined
As you're standing in front of me.
When I'm with you
I know you bring me down,
But it feels like I'm falling free
When I'm with you --
You're fucked up and you're cruel,
But that's the way it's supposed to
be.
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what a bOP
Hello! This is a really good song, i also thought that heavy rock, metal, would make the song POP! The lyrics are good, i really liked how you used the word enigma, thats such a fun word to say! Hee hee!
I dont want to repeat past comments, but yes, it might be a bit long.
This isnt a major issue but i didnt quite understand
" But it feels like i'm falling free. "
would that be the same as free falling? Once again not a big issue because it rhymes with the lyrics.
Cant wait to read your next big thing
-XOXO Leyah
this is good. i couldn't read anything wrong with it, but for a song it might be a little too long. I got the feeling that it would go to metal or heavy rock music, or maybe something like evanescence.
^^favorite stanza