Hey, FatCowsSis!
Just wanted to drop in and give ya a review to help you out and whatnot. Well, actually, I may not even have to because you did a killer job with this poem. I like the way you described everything. This is a cool piece.
Your grammar and punctuation looks on top, so I don't have to go over that with you or anything. The set up for the stanzas is also good because they make everything flow together smoothly. Anyway, nice skills.
-Unidentified
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