Wow, i loved this...
fig newtons till i vomit... ew... why not grow a damn tree in your belly while you're at it? MARVELOUS!!!
Note to self: Work harder on constructive critisism dear, i can't like everything...
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Seemed to not flow. But other than that, not bad. Have i ever called anyone's work bad?
While very creative in its own right, I just couldn't get into it Brad...maybe I'm reading it wrong.
I must tell you, I totally empathize though