yeesh
poor girl
if i walked to her would she hurt?
but a mere child could bring her down...
poor her.
this was eeire... barely understandable though. by me [little child me]
but great job with it... it ctually sorta applied to the title! *claps*
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For some reason I was able to predict what was going to happen next the entire poem. Weird...
Anyway, it was pretty darn sad if you asked me even though the last stanza made me laugh. *shrugs* I guess because I tried to picture it in my head.