Nate the Great.

by Dragongirl

Published February 2, 2012

In Poetry

I wrote this poem for fun and as a way to say thank you to Nate. Hope you like it.

                  Nate the Great  

 Nate, the young writer, has got mad skills
 When it comes to updating websites.
 Even sticken after a donut run
 He's stayed up hard at work many nights.

 For a time the 'Like' button dissappeared,
 But it has since been returned.
 What we need now is a button saying;
 ' This Work Should Really Be Burned'.

 Oh,come on. Don't take it that way.
 You know that I simply tease.
 On YWS we're polite and kind
 What I meant was 'Burn This Trash PLEASE!'

 But all jokes aside,
 I just want to thank Nate.
 Because with all his hard work
 The site's looking great!

  Thanks for reading! ~DG
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Sonder
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Sonder wrote a review Review · Aug 25, 2013

Dragongirl! Griffin here for a review...sort of. :P

I liked this piece! It was cute and did a great job thanking Nate in a playful way. I was confused by the line,

Even sticken after a donut run


I wasn't sure what that meant. :/ I liked how you mentioned when the "Like" button disappeared and returned, I laughed. Good job. Not sure the "Burn This" would be a good idea...worried one of mine would end up there. XD
Anyway, nice job.

Keep writing and being amazing!

~GC

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thetraveler
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thetraveler commented Comment · Feb 3, 2012

Very cute and GOLed (giggled out loud) and it serves a purose: thanking Nate :)

Thanks that was what I was going for! :D



You have to write the book that wants to be written. And if the book will be too difficult for grown-ups, then you write it for children.
— Madeleine L'Engle, Author