Hey you I am here to give you a review.
I am going to tackle each stanza individually.
The first stanza:
I suggest that the first line does not end with a full stop but with a colon ) because the following lines described what the beauty of nature is. Also anther thing is the lines are not really evenly written as in the number of syllables in each line do not match and thus make it a bit rushed when reading out loud.
The second stanza:
My personal favourite. I love the words chosen and the imagery created.
As for the other stanzas there are similar irregular syllables and no evident rhyme but that is ok anyways. I enjoyed it as it was very free flowing and its so relatable xD
keep writing!
~RS
Points: 58
Reviews: 77
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