it's a bird,
flying so swiftly,
almost hitting that
aeroplane.
no it's that plane,
twisting left and
right, avoiding every
ufo in its way.
no it's superman,
manning that ufo from
way out in the outer
space, from krypton.
no it's a song,
and a hammer
and a bell, that will
be used all over this
world.
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Hi @Shikora here with a review.
First I loved this work, it was really good. There wasn't that much mistakes.
Now down to the review.
(it's a bird,
flying so swiftly,
almost hitting that
aeroplane.
no it's that plane,
twisting left and
right, avoiding every
ufo in its way.
no it's superman,
manning that ufo from
way out in the outer
space, from krypton.
no it's a song,
and a hammer
and a bell, that will
be used all over this
world.)
Now I'm going to go through and fix it. First aeroplane is spelt like this airplane.
(It's a bird,
flying so swiftly,
almost hitting that
airplane.
No it's that plane,
twisting left and
right, avoiding every
ufo in its way.
No it's superman,
manning that ufo from
way out in the outer
space, from krypton.
No it's a song,
and a hammer,
and a bell, that will
be used all over this world.)
It was just small mistakes I went through and fixed for you. You just need to remember that a sentence starts with a capital letter. I also added the world and the this in the same sentence because the world didn't go all by it's self.
And that is all from me for the moment. I hope to see more works from you! Have a good day.
Your friend @Shikora, and happy review day.
Hi there @DEA I am here to do I review on your work, first this is a good length, almost hitting that aeroplane, birds are youshly skeard of aeroplanes, you do no that right, no it's superman, I am not really shore about this bit at all really, pleas make it a bit more kleer to me, no it's a song, and a hammer and a bell, I am really confoused right now pleas ekslan you self, the rest was really good, keep up with the good work,
I like your avater and your name, 
@EagleFly out to seek and kill