Hi, Manilla here for a quick review. The speaker seems like they're really in love with their S.O. The imagery and figurative language is used well here, for they come hand in hand. I don't have nitpicks for this poem (which is a good thing), so I'll get into the overall message you have.
This style that you're using in this poem seems more like a hybrid between freeverse and narrative fiction. I like it and I think it's unique. The way you wrote this "poem" also works with your content, which flows nicely as well.
The girl that the speaker loves just seems perfect in their eyes, perfect in a way that they go beyond just working for each other. The message is conveyed loud and clear!
I can't pick favorite verses like Radrook, so I'll say that I just liked your poem and will look forward to more of your work!
-Manilla out ^^
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