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Till now it's all about drugs and sex and yeah that's pretty much it , see there has to be something in the book your writing that will make it standout from every other book of this category . There has to be the factor that will make me want to read it , and there is always going to be a question "what makes this book tick ?" or "should I keep reading this book" This question should never come in the minds of the reader . It has to standout from every other book , it has to catch on the reader's either from the first page like the starting of Hardy boys or be like Harry Potter developing the story ... developing the story ... and bam !! I need to read this ! . It just seems like an idea that was stolen from Meg Cabot .
-Tanya / tanya98
P.S. - sorry if i'm being harsh ..
Tony why!!! T-T I'm so jaloux of Joy right now o.O pretty weird huh.....