Reviewing lyrics is always bit weird because it's meant to be heard rather than read. That said, this seems uneven, and I believe that's because of the rhyming scheme.
Verse 1 goes AA, BB, CC, which is good. But then verse 2 goes A, B, C, C, D, E, E. The first two lines don't rhyme even though it seems like that's what you were going for. Even if they did though, the D that's thrown in there is out of place. Verse 3 kind of has a rhyming scheme, but it seems like you're stretching things.
Having a rhyming scheme is hardly essential, but if you include it, then it should be carried throughout the work. Otherwise, it sounds uneven and rocky. The reader at least gets used to reading in rhyme, and so when that rhythm gets disturbed, it messes things up. For the listener, I guess it depends on how it's sung.
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