Hi, Lives4Christ is here with a review on this amazing work of poetry
I really see the message in the poetry, that life isn't about the outward stuff. God looks on the inside not the outside. Sometimes you have to realize this and remind yourself of this and just take break from all the drama and enjoy life.
I don't see any errors in your poetry, I really like the poem and I think it might get in the literary spotlight.
There's a Christian song by Jonny Diaz called breathe and your poem reminded me of it and these lyrics
Breathe, just breathe
Come and rest at my feet
And be, just be
I really look forward to seeing your work in the future
Points: 1335
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