Tigerlilly here for a quick review!
I have read many of your poems, and I must say, this one has to be my favorite. Like I've said before, you speak the truth in your writing, which is very admirable. And you do it in such a way that is truly flawless... Nothing wrong with the grammar, the message is superb, and the rhyme flows perfectly. I don't know how you do it. I wish I could be as talented as you.
I must say that my favorite stanza is the last, because it ends similarly as how it had started. Both the beginning as well as the end were very strong, and the message was carried across well in the middle stanzas.
Great job, and keep writing!
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