Hi Iggy, I've got two pieces I love reviewed, but you don't have to do both. If you have more time, I have a longer short story called The Last Apple Tree. Otherwise, if you'd like to do something shorter, I'd like feedback on a poem called Americana Border. Thanks!
hullo, Iggy. i started writing again and just finished yet another rewrite of The Pact's prologue and part two of chapter one. i'd like you to review both.
I would love if you had a peek at my story as a whole... Just sort of a general overview thing. Ignore grammar and stuff, that's what editors are for. I'm aware I'm out of the green room, however I'm still lacking on a perspective of the greater picture.
I've started (trying) to write my novel again, and as someone who was reading it when I first posted it last year, I figured it'd be cool if you could check out the new second chapter I wrote for it.
Hi Iggy. You've reviewed some of my earliest chapters, you may or may not remember. Anyway, my chapters are around 3,000 words usually, and so I don't get too many reviews and my stuff sits around. Can you help me?
Chapter 13 thru 15 are in the green room right now. If you could help me out on even one, I would be super grateful.
Okay, that's what I'd like you to review, and it's the Part Two of the prologue. I noticed in your instructions that it needs to be the 1st chapter and all, so you can read the First Part of the prologue as well! :p I only need a review on the 2nd Part, though. Thanks!
Greeting I was wondering if i could bother you for a really small review on a really short short story i wrote. Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited) no rush though whenever you get to it thank you
Words are, in my not-so-humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic. Capable of both inflicting injury, and remedying it. ~J.K. Rowling
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