Actually, the first thing I thought of was how this sounds so much like The Host in a way...
Except, it's sort of different...
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Ai, but it's still a good, well thought-out plot. Doesn't it frustrate you when you have a good plot but you know that you don't have the skills to write it out yet?
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Ah, sorry... But it is not really like Ultraviolet, in many ways
(The Host being that monster fishy?)
Oh, I know that feeling... I myself have a story which I do not write because I am not good enough... I might share it in turn if everyone promises not to steal it
This morning, a fruit fly went up my nose.^^ And I spit it out through my mouth. It was so disgusting. I have to ask dad if he has some instrument to clean my nasal canal. >~<
Anyway, you can go ahead and write out your plot. ^u^
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HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
But if I write out my plot, what if I don't want to write it out any more? /-\ What if I screw up and then feel to dejected to continue? /-\ I don't want that to happen, I want my baby to perfect and be loved by others than me ^^ HE'S SO F*CKIN AFORABLE!! SO WHITE!! ^u^
I am a Leaf on the Wind, Watch me Soar ~ Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel, Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night
Ah...sorry... I meant that as a response to Drak...
But if you think he's likable, then he'll be likable. Not just to you, but to others too. But not likable as in boy-next-door likable... That's just doesn't fit my fancy...
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Yeah, I was sort of dumb suggesting the host... Meyer really. Why was she the first thing I thought about?!
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. — Mark Twain