Actually, the first thing I thought of was how this sounds so much like The Host in a way...
Except, it's sort of different...
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Ai, but it's still a good, well thought-out plot. Doesn't it frustrate you when you have a good plot but you know that you don't have the skills to write it out yet?
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Ah, sorry... But it is not really like Ultraviolet, in many ways
(The Host being that monster fishy?)
Oh, I know that feeling... I myself have a story which I do not write because I am not good enough... I might share it in turn if everyone promises not to steal it
This morning, a fruit fly went up my nose.^^ And I spit it out through my mouth. It was so disgusting. I have to ask dad if he has some instrument to clean my nasal canal. >~<
Anyway, you can go ahead and write out your plot. ^u^
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HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
But if I write out my plot, what if I don't want to write it out any more? /-\ What if I screw up and then feel to dejected to continue? /-\ I don't want that to happen, I want my baby to perfect and be loved by others than me ^^ HE'S SO F*CKIN AFORABLE!! SO WHITE!! ^u^
I am a Leaf on the Wind, Watch me Soar ~ Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel, Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night
Ah...sorry... I meant that as a response to Drak...
But if you think he's likable, then he'll be likable. Not just to you, but to others too. But not likable as in boy-next-door likable... That's just doesn't fit my fancy...
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)
Yeah, I was sort of dumb suggesting the host... Meyer really. Why was she the first thing I thought about?!
HERE>>OTAKU FOR LIFE<<HERE "People's feelings are memories that transcend time[that's why they're so hard to forget]." - Steins;Gate(Makise) "I'm not stupid. I'm just too lazy to show how smart I am." -Hyouka(Oreki)