Young Writers Society

I'll do a line-by-line, an overview, or both. Just specify.
I'll review both poetry and prose, but if it's ridiculously long, don't expect a review anytime soon, especially not if it's a weekday and I'm being eaten alive by algebra.

I'll review any genre and any type of poetry, unless it's a style with which I'm way too unfamiliar (i.e. manga, sci-fi, horror, etc). So I'll tell you if your piece scares the bejezuz out of me and I'm afraid that it'll bite my head off if I touch it.

You can ask me to focus on specific things, or you can ask me to do a general. Anything goes. Keep in mind, my strong point is grammar.

Oh! I almost forgot! I'll also review Art and Photography, but expect those to be short, 'kay? I'm not an artsy person, I just know how things are supposed to look.

Hmm.... That's about it. Bug me anytime, and I'll critique. The free food is optional, but preferable.

Hey hey hey!!

I could really use an opinioned overview of My First and Final Escape. Its very short, like 450 words, but some opinions would be awesome.


I would give you a cupcake or a cookie but I'm a really bad baker so...that might not turn out so good. Instead here's a pretend cupcake *hands over a giant cupcake with lots of pretty pink sprinkles*

Thank you.

I have something kind of long. ^_^;
So, to bribe you:


An overview would be fantastic, but I understand if you simply don't have the time (or will.) XD

It's here. Any comments would be loved. : D

&_&
How can I bribe you to look at mine after THAT?
-sneaks up and steals a cupcake too-

n_n If you could take a look at my latest poem, that would be fantastic. Be as harsh as you can! =D

Seasons of Ice / His Eyes

Also, let me know which title you like better for it. Hehehe. ^_^

Thank you so much~

It would be wonderful if you could review the first chapter of my new story, 'The Need'. ^.^ If you don't want to to, you know, you don't have to. It'd be nice though. It's a rather short chapter, and it would be awesome if you could just a do a overview. Don't worry about reviewing it, like right now... I'm very patient.
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Oh and yes, and free cupcake is in store.
*tosses red velvet with butter cream icing*
...
YOU CAN ADD SPRINKLES. [/end capslock attack]

Alright. I reviewed all of you guys (obviously).

Aww, am I out of business already?

Pen! I'm sorry, I don't have a cupcake, but I do have a review, if you want it!

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genre: Romantic fiction

Thanks!
*Kat*

*holds out cupcake in hands*

Do you review lyrics?

tnme ~ Yes, I'll review lyrics, but it might not be too good of a review. xD Give me the link and I'll see what I can do.

If you don't mind, I'd like a review
*hands cupcake* There's more where that came from *cackles*

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It's kind of a lot, so take your time, and please feel free to tear them to shreds

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Thanks a lot!

-Carly

Why is this thread so empty?

This will not do!

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Fantasy Fiction

The product of a Word War, so look at for some crazy spelling. Once in a WW I said unscented instead of unseen.
And unscented intruder. >-<

But I digress.

*hands you a baker's dozen of cupcakes*

Hey Explosive!
I was hoping you could check out my "Which Path to Take?" contest entry. It's Fantasy Fiction, PG and called Wyndolyn. I wanted to get some reviews on it to spiff it up some before the contest (on the 15th). I hope you don't die of boredom reading it LOL.
~Dakota

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Tis very short, so it won't be a hassle. I'd like some advice on the characterization, please. I'll review all your pieces too! Hehe. *hands over a plate of cupcakes*