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Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:01 am
Angels-Symphony says...



topic42305.html
topic42847.html

Thank you^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

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Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:31 am
anti-pop says...



Stori - finished!
asxz - working on it as we speak. ;)
angels - it shall be done soon!
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:05 am
MidnightVampire says...



Hey antipop! Could you (pretty please) review something of mine?
Title:Trees of Promise
Genre:Narative Poetry
Link:
topic42652.html
Please be as harsh as you need..I was also wondering if you knew a better title....
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)





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Sat Feb 14, 2009 11:53 pm
anti-pop says...



Bumping. New rules, check 'em out! ^_^


~anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:47 pm
anti-pop says...



:(
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:03 pm
Moriah Leila says...



I'm not sure if you have time for another review, but if you do I'd love your input on my latest story.

Title: Untitled Chapter One (I need help on this)
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post505446.html#505446

As always I will return the favor, just PM me the link to whatever you would like a critique for. Thanks!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.





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Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:04 am
anti-pop says...



Done, Moriah. Nice job! And thank you very much, but these critiques are absolutely free! ^^


~anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:20 pm
Moriah Leila says...



Since you did such a splendid job on my last review I'd love it if you could check out the rest of the chapters that I have posted. Thanks!

Title: For The Girls
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: Chapter Two Part One
Chapter Two Part Two
Chapter Three Part One
Chapter Three Part Two
Chapter Four

THANK YOU BUNCHES AND BUNCHES!!!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:01 am
anti-pop says...



Moriah - halfway done! ^^

Anyone else while I'm feeling motivated? XD


~anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:20 am
asxz says...



Hi, you reviewed me before... I'm back for another! [Link here]
This is the prologue for my story, Split personalities, I worked real hard over the weekend and I practically re-did the entire thing. Thanks!
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:58 pm
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Nutty says...



Pop! Could you do mine for me?
Trapped within your own skin: topic44236.html
I'm looking for opinions on the content over grammar, as I think most of the grammar mistakes have been found.
Thankye!
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:29 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Hello! Do you think you can review my story for me? Here's a link. post513119.html#513119
Title:Children of Mana
Genre:Fantasy.

THanks So Much!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:19 pm
Threnody says...



HI! You look busy... I hope you can pretty please find some room for this.

I'm taking a chance with my poetry as I need a review bad.
post514944.html#514944

It's called Coffee.

Thanks so much!
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 11:08 pm
anti-pop says...



Alright, ladies and gents! For the time being I am now CLOSED!
Once I'm finished with the requests I have now, I shall re-open.

Thank you. :)


~anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:34 pm
anti-pop says...



Hello, dears.

Pop is back! And this thread is officially reopened.

^_^
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto








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