Hey there! Can you please help me review this? I'd really appreciate it.
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again. and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.
Can you *pretty pretty please with a cherry or five on top* review the novel I've started working on, Hide and Seek? It's action adventure: novel.php?id=946 Thanks so much!!!!
'I didn't know that I could ever forgive him for everything he'd done to me. Now that I looked back on it, that he'd put a child through such torment seemed even worse. But right now, it wasn't him I was forgiving or thanking. It wasn't even about him. I was forgiving myself.' -Speak Into Silence
The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they. — TheMythMaster