It has to have a ABCB Rhyme
4 line stanza
Repetition
Lacking Detail
Use of Everday Speech
and End Abruptly
4 stresses, 3 stresses, 4 stresses, and then 3 stresses again
Keeping those in mine here's my ballad =]
Spoiler! :
The sun shone bright on a hot summer day
As I splashed inside the pool
I went no farther than the 4 feet
Oh how it was so cruel
All of us were first graders
Yet they knew how to swim
I was abandoned and companionless
When a thought made my mouth grin
“I’ll go down the slide to the seven feet
And come back in a breeze
I’ll pump my arms and kick my legs
Oh how mother will be pleased”
Wasting no time I departed the pool
And strode to the other side
Up the slide ladder I climbed
Waiting patiently in the line!
Finally when it was my turn
I sealed my eyes and glided down
Immediately when I hit the water
I was afraid I was going to drown
Panic started to overwhelm me
And I started to have second thoughts
Only water was there to surround me
And air was what I sought
“Help” I managed to cry out
Before descending to the pool floor
My lungs ached and begged for air
As death came knocking on my door
The next thing I knew after that
I was lying down in a bed
“Whew, it was all just a dream,” I said
But then why did I feel wet?
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