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borntobeawriter · 2010-11-27T16:10:31Z

Hey everyone! I'm constantly browsing this site in hopes of finding another great chapter to reviewer. But I've decided to play it smart and let you come to me, instead. *laughs evilly* So come one, come all, and let me work my magic! What I will review: Fantasy Action/Adventure Romance General fiction. Both in short story and novel length. For the rest of the categories, I'm simply not very good at them and my reviews wouldn't be worth much. Also, I would really appreciate a comeback to my reviews. Either on this thread, or following my review on your own thread. I often go through a lot of my time and quite some patience to review and it would be nice to know it helped. Or not. :D These a few examples of my reviews: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788677.html#p788677 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post787353.html#p787353 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post785938.html#p785938 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post783670.html#p783670 My reasons for sharing these links? I can be very thorough, and sometimes, some might perceive me as harsh. I try to be as delicate as possible and demonstrate the good points as much as the bad. But if you read these and don't like my reviewing style, then please don't ask me to review; It's just annoying and rude to tell me my review stinks because you have not yet become accustomed to critism. Don't forget to link your chapter with your request and feel free to ask me for a review; I will get to it as soon as possible! I would like to add something here. I have a weird schedule. My fiancé is a trucker and when he's home, I stay away from the internet. So, if he's home, and you request a review, it might take a couple days. If not, I'm not it like jam on peanut butter. ;)

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Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:26 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:26 pm

Shubhi, Pointe: Done!

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Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:04 am

Sins says... · Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:04 am

I'm so happy I'm actually posting on this, for once!

You're finally free!

*Dances like a madman on sugar lumps*

Well, you probably have loads of PM requests, but hey, you're free according to this. Anyways, I would love to be graced by your awesomeness, sister in-law. Could you check out my latest instalment of Stop and Stare?

post805054.html#p805054

As you can see, I've already got a billion reviews, but it just feels empty without you... You would complete it. Besides, I've edited it quite a bit since my last review, so some fresh opinions would be nice.

Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:42 am

borntobeawriter says... · Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:42 am

Skinsy, done! Thanks for the request!

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Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:24 am

TedusCloud says... · Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:24 am

If you could

topic73947.html

Hope the length won't deter you

Pieces of People: 42,044 words. Only 57,956 to go

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Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:40 pm

cassidyrose says... · Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:40 pm

Your " I died tonight" poem was quite good. It was one of those stories that you think you know what is going to happen, but you reall don't... I didn't expect it to be a computer. Anyway, Will you please reveiw my story? It is a romantic novel... I am a novice... the story is kind of cliche...etc. So anyway, I am in need of advice... and a reveiw. Will you do me the honors?
Thnx... Cassidy Rose :smt001

Take A Peace
Of My Heart
And be Happy

I have no idea what to put so I am writing random things. There. That should be enough.

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Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:45 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:45 pm

Cloud, Cassi : done!

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Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:53 pm

LadySpark says... · Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:53 pm

ch. 6 of THe Magi is out. Please review!
topic74725.html

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:36 am

LanaBrown says... · Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:36 am

Wow! Your I ddied tonoght poem was good. I would love for you to review my poem and tell me what you think.

We're all in the same game, just on different levels; Dealing with the same hell, only different devils.

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:24 am

MiaParamore says... · Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:24 am

MOMMA!

I am done with the third chapter of Know I'm Here and here's the link-Know I'm Here(3)

Please and thank you!

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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:05 pm

iceprincess says... · Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:05 pm

Hey there! :wink:

I heard that you're a brilliant reviewer, so can you please review this for me? It's my first time ever writing a love story, and I'd love it if you could help me shred it to pieces.

The ending's kind of predictable right now, I guess.

you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.

Want a review?

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Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:03 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:03 pm

Pointe, Lana, Shubhi and Iceprincess: Done!

Thanks for the requests!

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Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:41 pm

LittlePrincess says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:41 pm

Hi!
I was wondering if you could review my story, topic74886.html
It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much!

~Little Princess

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:06 pm

LadySpark says... · Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:06 pm

'ello Mother Dear! will you please review my new novel? I need the harshest you can give me!
novel.php?id=1026
*snugs*
Pointe

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

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Thu Jan 20, 2011 2:23 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Thu Jan 20, 2011 2:23 pm

LittlePrincess, Pointe: done!

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:21 pm

LadySpark says... · Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:21 pm

hi Mommmy,
new novel (how many times have I said that?) anyway its called Snow and is a twist of the classic snow white

this is a link to chapter 2, which I need reviews on, but I suggest you read chapter 1 first.

viewtopic.php?t=75147

thanks and please
~pointe

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

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I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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