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Hi there! Could you review this short story of mine?
viewtopic.php?t=73246

I don't do a lot of romance fiction, and it's not meant to be passionate and lustful or anything, but I don't know exactly how to improve it.

Thank you so much!
-River
My main project until Script Frenzy is an experiment using blog posts between four characters as episodes of a common story. You can read this work as it progresses at http://knowallchronicles.blogspot.com/.




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Here's a heavily edited version of Deep Magic. Very long >.>
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
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Integrity First
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Please review the first chapter of my novel 'Wings and Fins'.




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Done, everyone! Hope it helped!




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I know you said you didn't care for reviewing H.F but I don't wish for you to pick apart the historical accuracy of it, I'd just like an average review on my writing style and what your opinion is of it.
Feel free to give me your honest opinion if you do choose you review it!
Thank you :)
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Hello Tanya! Er... you don't know me... but could you please review this short story?

viewtopic.php?t=73454

Thank you!!!

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Tabby




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Hey!

If you have time would you be interested in reviewing this for me? :P
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73458.html

All critism's are welcome! :D

Thank you!
HEY YOU!
Yeah you! :D

You should check out my latest novel "Part of the Night!"
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Tabby, Ally, done!

Thanks for the requests! :D




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Hi!
I've seen some of your reviews, and they're very good! :D
Now that I've gotten flattery out of the way... do you think you could please review this chapter of my novel for me?

topic73162.html

No rush, but thanks in advance if you do it! :)
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Hi!
I've seen some of your reviews, and they're very good! :D
Now that I've gotten flattery out of the way... do you think you could please review this chapter of my novel for me?

topic73162.html

No rush, but thanks in advance if you do it! :)
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If you don't mind, could you review my story? Your reviews are great
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73442.html :pirate3:




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Orinette, Aqua, you are both reviewed!

Tanya :D



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