Hey Silented1, can you please review with special format poem for me?http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post794877.html#p794877 Thanks =D if u can haha
Hello! If you have the time/if it's not too absolutely horrendous would you please review this for me?: viewtopic.php?t=73083
I've always been more of a story writer, so it was just this summer that I wrote my first poems and have been writing them on and off for a few months. I am a novice, so be as harsh as you can. I want to get better.
Thanks!
Drawers
ps: I was pretty sure from your title that you are open at the moment. If you are not I apologize, and do not worry about me.
You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it.
And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because I want to know which part of story making is my strength and weakness like a literal critic. So that when I make a new story, I know what to improve.
Lain Iwakura: If you're not remembered, then you never existed.
That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them. — Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)
