Hey Silented1, can you please review with special format poem for me?http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post794877.html#p794877 Thanks =D if u can haha
Hello! If you have the time/if it's not too absolutely horrendous would you please review this for me?: viewtopic.php?t=73083
I've always been more of a story writer, so it was just this summer that I wrote my first poems and have been writing them on and off for a few months. I am a novice, so be as harsh as you can. I want to get better.
Thanks!
Drawers
ps: I was pretty sure from your title that you are open at the moment. If you are not I apologize, and do not worry about me.
You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it.
And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because I want to know which part of story making is my strength and weakness like a literal critic. So that when I make a new story, I know what to improve.
Lain Iwakura: If you're not remembered, then you never existed.
"You know, sometimes all you need is twenty seconds of just embarrassing bravery. And I promise you, something great will come of it." — We Bought A Zoo
