going to try to stay open for a bit longer this time.

Like a review.
Poetry only please.
Post a link as well, along with any comments you feel you should add, like any special information that I'll need to know to understand it, or anything you want me to focus on, like flow, or imagery or whatever.

I'll probably be harsh / oboxious / pointless( at times within the review).

Preferances:
Length(at most):40 lines in total. Not counting the breaks inbetween stanzas
Length(at least):10 lines.
I would like for the poem to have a message, not just describing how great a rainbow is. This is a flexable rule, it will vary depending on the poem.

But I will PM you the reason(s) as to why I am not reviewing your poem. And I will owe you a review on your next poem, no matter what.

Lastly, I reserve the right to decline you of the review. Like what is said above, if I decline you a review, I will PM you why and I will review your next poem no matter what.

Even more lastly than what is above: Please feel free to PM me if I haven't given you a review without PMing you first, or leaving something here, by the way.

Old topic name(just because I am lazy): Give me something to do.(if you like harsh reviews) Reopened

Any of mine please, need lots of feedback on them

In that case, Ed, I present to you a poem that would seriously benefit from help: post783007.html#p783007

thanks!

It's about time! =D
May you rip it to shreds, oh great one.
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By the way, I am aware that the moon cannot be bigger than the sun, it was based off a sketch I did...

Thanks in advance! (if you do it)

-Shear

PaperCrane wrote:Any of mine please, need lots of feedback on them

Alright, but please in the future, leave me a link.

Amy, your review is done, I'll start working on your poem, pink. And I'll get to paper's when I have the time to go searching for one.

Paper, your review is also done. As well as pink's.

I'm back open.

If you have the time, could you please take a look at this?

topic72242.html


Thanks!

-Coral-

Hello agian!
Me agian!
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Another poem.

Thanks,

~Rain~

Hey Eddie, could you review this for me please? topic72330.html

Okay, three poems are in cue. I do not want to be overloaded, so until I've finished atleast 2 / 3, please do not ask for a review. Sorry.

Silent, your poem is done. I'll have to get to the others tomorrow since it's almost 1am. Sorry.

Flower, your poem is done, and Perse, your poem is done as well.

post788803.html#p788803

I'd really appreciate it if you could review this. Thanks
Vampyre

Thanks heaps for the review, I really appreciate it. Will edit later when I have time.
Thanks again
Vampyre

I'm still open, lol.

I would love a harsh review on one of my poems. Here's the link:
topic72616.html
Thanks!