Cheers Hope! =) Well then, let's try putting you to work? ^^ Joke, just wanted to ask if you'd review one of my best works I guess =) It's got just two chapters now ( Which aren't really long, no worries there! ) and you can take your time. If you'd like something in return, please let me know =) I'll otherwise give you some points.
hey, trying to sell this movie, and I need it to be perfect. It's posted in parts, of course, so if you want them all:
1-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic67805.html 2-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic67846.html 3- topic68047.html you don't have to review them all
And the angel said unto him, “stop hitting yourself, stop hitting yourself.” But lo, he could not stop, for the angel was hitting him with his own hands.
