Hey, um, I wouldn't mind a review. I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you because it does have swearing in it, but I'd really like some more opinions especially on improvements, things like the plot, the characters, etc. Here's the link if you can review: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60449.html Thanks, I really appreciate it DM.
Frank Costello: When you decide to be something, you can be it. That's what they don't tell you in the church. When I was your age they would say we can become cops, or criminals. Today, what I'm saying to you is this: when you're facing a loaded gun, what's the difference? [The Departed]
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
