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Mr.Knightley · 2010-03-10T22:34:11Z

So, as you can see, I've spruced up my WRFF thread a bit. Several reasons behind that bit of logic: 1) I feel bad for all of the people who I forgot about in this thread. Honestly, it's not that hard to go and do a review, but hey, I suck. This is me starting fresh (well, as fresh as I can, short of starting yet another WRFF thread and clogging the forum). New mindset and new reviews. Which brings me to my second excuse for changing the title! 2) New reviews. From now on, I'll be doing my absolute best in the critiques I do through this thread. If that means that I can only do one a day because they take so long, then so be it. You'll just have to wait, you big baby. 3) This goes along with reason number two, but it looks so spiffy when I give it its own number: I want the Reviewer II Badge. I want to be THAT helpful. And thus, I shall learn how to be. :D With your help, it shouldn't be too hard. : ) And with that, let's get to the good stuff: Things I will review: Fiction (Short Stories): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Historical Fiction Fiction (Novels): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Misc.: Art/Photography Other Advanced Critiques (expect a delay) Lyrics (will be mildly harsh) Poetry: Dramatic Lyric Narrative Other Things I'll do if you're nice and don't mind my grumblings: Non-fiction Scripts Things I won't be caught dead reviewing by default of gender: Romantic novels/short stories Most fan-fiction*, particularly the Twilight kind *But if it's not a Twilight fanfic, then let me know, and I'll see if I can do something for you. Just don't take it personally if I don't want to. :P And there you have it! I think I pretty much covered every topic...how lame, right? Well, just keep in mind that I'm looking to be helpful in any way possible, and if that means I have to be brutally honest with you, then I probably will be. : ) Good luck.

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Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:30 pm

MiaParamore says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:30 pm

Would you mind doing this? Well, I have many good reviews for it already but I can definitely use some more. Just 1411 left

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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:10 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:10 pm

All done. Keep on requesting!

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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:25 pm

Sins says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:25 pm

Hey Knightley

Could you possibly review something for me?
It's the first chapter/prologue of a romantic novel. I'm not too sure about it, it's a bit... meh, and I'd appreciate your awesomeness :wink:

post694670.html#p694670

Sorry about the url... I'm to lazy to make it pretty

Thanks!

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Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:09 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:09 pm

Aw, you think I'm awesome? Why thankee very much!

*reviews*

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Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:08 pm

Sins says... · Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:08 pm

Yeah... you know the drill :lol:

Can You See Me (Chapter Six - Part One)

Could you review this pretty please....?

xoxo Skins

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Tue May 04, 2010 2:12 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Tue May 04, 2010 2:12 pm

Finished! Keep on requesting, please!

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Fri May 07, 2010 4:37 pm

Sins says... · Fri May 07, 2010 4:37 pm

Hey

It's me, your WRFF thread abuser. :twisted:

Can you review this for me?

It's the latest part of my story, Can You See Me?

Thanks a bunch Timmy!

xoxo Skins

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Thu May 27, 2010 2:51 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Thu May 27, 2010 2:51 pm

I don't think I reviewed that Skins! I'm so horrible! Do you still want me to review it? It's terribly late, but I think I should make it up to you.

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Thu May 27, 2010 8:36 pm

Sins says... · Thu May 27, 2010 8:36 pm

Don't worry about it! :lol:

You can still review it if you want, it's up to you.

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Fri May 28, 2010 12:47 am

CaseySaz says... · Fri May 28, 2010 12:47 am

Hi there!
I've written a general kind of short story for my creative writing class and I'd be really happy if you could review it for me:) As for gifts, I'd offer my soul but I'm pretty sure God would frown upon that and I'm kinda looking forward to heaven...so I'm hoping a giant obnoxious smiley face and a million thanks will do. Here's the link!:

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Thanks a ton! Casey

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Sat May 29, 2010 9:46 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sat May 29, 2010 9:46 pm

Done!

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Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:00 am

LisaMCooper says... · Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:00 am

Critique my story Blood and Fire? Please and thank you! ^^

Blood and Fire :arrow:

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Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:53 pm

LittlePetRock says... · Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:53 pm

topic64681.html Pweazze?
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Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:27 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:27 pm

Reviewed. Have a cookie, Minion. *feeds*

Anyone else want a cookie and a review?

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Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:23 am

NepoGirl says... · Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:23 am

YAY! I can reply again :smt003

Anyway, can you review chapter three in my novel. It has no comments and alot of grammer mistakes (I think) but I really can't pinpoint it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=65072

Thanks Mr. K!

And I would like a oreo cookie :smt003

Lots of

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