This is going to be the last part of this novel that I put on YWS, I don't want to end up posting the entire thing on here now, do I? Although, if I've written a chapter that I'm not to keen on, I'll definitely post it here for you guys' advice! If you need them, the rest of the chapters are in the 'possible related items' link thingy. There's probably a load of mistakes here because I wrote this at two o clock in the morning when I couldn't sleep... Like usual, I don't like this much. I'm too much of a perfectionist. Anyway, be as harsh as you like!
Can You See Me? Chapter One
Can You See Me? Chapter Two ~ Part One
Can You See Me? Chapter Two ~ Part Two
Can You See Me? Chapter Three
Can You See Me? Chapter Four
Can You See Me? Chapter Five
Can You See Me? Chapter Six ~ Part One
I hadn’t gotten it wrong when I judged Victoria Applegate’s personality; she was quiet. In fact, she was more than quiet. She had an eerie silence to her. We were supposed to be working on molecules, or something like that. I wasn’t sure, I was never really one to listen, or care, when it came to school. Victoria clearly didn’t understand the partner concept to the work; she was doing it all herself. Although, I didn’t mind it really because it meant less work for me. I was just copying what she wrote.
As Victoria scribbled down one of the answers, I took a closer look at her. I hadn’t noticed this before, but she kind of looked like Annabel, just with blue eyes. She had dark hair like Annabel, except Victoria’s fell just below her shoulders in loose curls.
As I observed her, I noticed that she had very unique eyes. On the outside, they were a deep, dark blue but the nearer they got to her pupil, the lighter they became. One thing I knew for sure, though, was that each blue shade was as impressively stunning. Wow, I was really beginning to sound like a girl now.
Still staring, I turned my attention slightly lower down. Below her small nose and below her thin lips until I reached her chest. That was when I remembered why I liked being a guy so much. Maybe it wouldn’t be so bad having to work with Victoria Applegate after all... Max, stop being a fricking pervert, I thought to myself. As I continued to stare, I realised that it was a lot harder thought than done. Just turn away, you creep.
Before I actually had the chance to turn away, I heard a soft, quiet voice.
“Um... are you okay?” Victoria said so quietly, I was surprised I even heard her.
“What?” I replied, finally concentrating on her face. “Uh, yeah. Sorry. I... uh... yeah.”
Wow. I really knew how to make an idiot out of myself. As I felt my cheeks redden, Victoria crossed her arms so that they were covering her chest. Prick.
I wanted to say something to her, considering I’d just made a prat of myself. I wanted her to know that I wasn’t some weird pervert, that was Jax’s job. He had some serious issues with staring aimlessly at guys, he even stared at me sometimes.
“So, Applegate huh? Where did that name come from?” Out of all of the things I could have said, I’d said that. Maybe it would have been best to just shut up?
“Don’t know,” she mumbled.
Wow, you really are a ladies man. No wonder you’ve had some many hot girlfriends. I thought to myself sarcastically.
It was definitely best for me to ignore Victoria from now on. Luckily, that was a pretty easy thing to do; it wasn’t like she was a fan of in depth conversations. As the lesson dragged on, my eyes wondered. I really did hate classrooms, they always looked so bland, even with walls full of colourful work. The Science classroom was no exception. The walls were painted a dirty white and the decorations were just as plain.
Bored of the simply decorated classroom, my attention returned to Victoria. It didn’t take long for my eyes to find themselves, once again, on her chest. I couldn’t help it; they were big.
“For God’s sake! Stop looking!” I heard a screechy voice scream in my ear.
“Shit!” I said, a little too loudly, making a few heads turn.
Well, at least my eyes weren’t fixated on Victoria’s chest anymore. Instead, I was looking in front of me to see a slim, dark haired woman. She didn’t look very happy, not by a long shot.
“You men are all the same! It’s disgusting! Quite frankly, I’ve had enough. When will you learn that there is more to a woman than her bre-” The woman suddenly paused, her eyes wide. “Wait, you can see me?”
No shit Sherlock, I chuckled to myself. To be honest, I wasn’t really listening to what she was saying; I was just impressed that she called me a man.
Suddenly, the woman was sitting in the stool beside me, her eyes glimmering with hope. Her long brown hair was tied back into a perfect ponytail, and on her thin legs she wore a pair of tattered jeans. She was wearing what looked like a navy blue t-shirt, and no; I didn’t look at her breasts.
As she scanned me with her light hazel eyes, I realised how stupid I had just been. I really wasn’t in the mood to speak to some dead chick, not today anyway. Maybe I could just pretend that I didn’t see her? It couldn’t be that hard to do.
“Look, you have to help me!” The woman pleaded, the same way every other dead guy and girl I ever met did. “I don’t know what to do.”
I closed my eyes for a few seconds; it was my only effort in trying to ignore her. As I opened my eyes, I was about to say something to Victoria. Surprisingly, she said something to me.
“Are you sure you’re okay?” She asked, narrowing her eyes.
“Yeah,” I muttered, shutting my eyes.
That was a lie.
I must have sat there for about fifteen minutes with some annoying woman screaming in my ear. The more she shouted, the harder I found it to believe that no one else could hear her. She had a voice like a blooming fog horn.
“I know you can see me!” The woman appeared in front of me again. She looked at me up and down before speaking again. “Fine! I guess we’ll have to do this the hard way!”
I was about to ask her what she meant by ‘the hard way’ when all of a sudden, my head felt painfully heavy like a medicine ball; and I thought a hangover was bad.
As the seconds dragged on, the pain became worse. After a measly minute, it felt as though I was going to throw up. The woman was still in front of me, her eyes blazing. I had no idea what she was doing – or how she was doing it – but I didn’t like it, that was for sure.
“Hey?” I heard Victoria’s soft voice above the pain. “Seriously...? Are you okay?”
I didn’t answer her this time, I couldn’t answer her. My head was killing me and I felt too weak to even try and speak.
“I’ll get Sir,” Victoria said.
“No!” I managed to say.
I didn’t want to draw any attention, not when there was some dead chick glaring at me as if I’d just punched her.
“Sir!” Victoria spoke loudly. Well, it was loud for her anyway.
I tried to tell Victoria to be quiet, but I couldn’t even do that now. I heard her call the teacher again as sudden exhaustion swept over my body.
“Help me!” the woman shouted in my face.
Help her? I couldn’t even think straight right now, let alone help some obnoxious spirit.
“That’s it!” she hissed.
As she spoke, the pain was suddenly replaced by a numbness. The seconds dragged on even longer and the world around felt as though it had more or less stopped.
I couldn’t help but let my eyelids slowly drop as my breathing became heavy. I heard the muffled noise of Victoria calling for the teacher once more, it was actually quite loud this time. Shutting my eyes, I could still see the face of the woman in my head as clear as glass. Managing to flicker my eyelids open for a few brief seconds, I saw it again; the woman’s face. Surprisingly, she almost looked concerned, apologetic even.
That was the last thing I saw because seconds later, I had lost consciousness; completely.
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