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Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:27 am
200397 says...



Hey, Lucy, would you mind doing one for your old pal here?

In Such a Night

It's my entry for KailaMarie's contest, but I would lurve it if you'd check it out. I know how you love long posts. :wink:

~Sunny





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Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:55 pm
lucyy says...



I'm getting straight to it, Sunny =D

Any more requests anyone?? (:
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:31 am
lucyy says...



Anyone at all...?? ^^
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:59 pm
jasmine12 says...



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Do you mind? There are four parts...and soon there will be more. It's for school so I need it to be prefect. Some harsh or nice reviews would be helpful!! Thanks.


well, off to bloodlust...
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:47 pm
wiccaryan says...



I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:25 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
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