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lucyy · 2008-10-18T15:27:09Z

Preferences . Romantic fiction and any kind of fiction really is my speciality . If you have a story that you haven't yet posted on YWS, and want someone to review it beforehand - ask me and I'll help out!! Just let me know on here first so I can keep track of everything =P . I will have a go at scripts, fanfiction, and art critiques, but I warn you beforehand that they may not be too good, but I'm willing to try (: . Please, no sci-fi, fantasy, non-fiction or poetry requests My Reviewing Techniques Firstly, I will go through the work and point out any grammar, wording, etc. mistakes I could spot. Then I will go through my thoughts of the story in more detail at the bottom, so you will get a feel of what your audience is thinking throughout reading it, and I will also point out where I think you could improve. Here are a couple of my recent reviews: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post483308.html#483308 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37922.html Advanced Warning My critiques tend to be nit-picky and harsh, but please don't be offended, as I try to help as much as I can! Price There are no strings attached, I just love having the chance of helping people out if I can - I'm strange like that haha :wink: But if you want to check my work out, you're more than welcome :D My completed requests: Teddybear22: The Triangle Effect ( Chapters 1, 2 & 3 ) Shannon: Second From the Left Fun4eva: The Meeting at the Cafe Bickazer: Vicissitudes ( 1. Alice ; 3. Tyler ; 4. Laurence ) Fun4eva: How I survived High School Kissthewitch: Everything Sparkles CastleInTheSky: Broken - 7 Rascalover Night Mistress: Poison Love ( Prologue; Chapter One; Chapter Two ) Maki Chan: Silent Hill; Shepherd's Lamb ( Prologue ) Stori: Take My Voice 200397(Sunny): Ophelia's Death RGallagher: The Elves Are Coming KaliaMarie: Hey Babycakes 1stViolinS.C.: No name, sorry silverSUNLIGHTx: Message Three Prelude ( Part One & Two ) Moriah Leliah: For The Girls ( Chapter One ) EmmVeePi: The Last Good Man Forever Threnody: Piper's Legend Dudette: Lily Foxglove (1) My current requests: My Sunshine: You Kept Me Alive ( over email ) Teddybear22: The Triangle Effect ( Chapter 4 )

Mars

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Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:20 am

Mars says... · Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:20 am

Pretty, pretty please?:smt064
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Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:57 am

pshhxhoney says... · Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:57 am

Please and Thanks you>

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Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:02 pm

CastlesInTheSky says... · Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:02 pm

Hey there, Luce.
Could you be an absolute star and review Broken?

I'd like : Chapter Seven: topic37916.html
and chapters nine and ten, if that's not too much of a problem.
They're obviously later chapters in the novella so you may have to read through earlier chapters to decipher what's going on.

Thankyou so much! You rock.

xxx

Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.