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well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

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If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*
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Done!!
More, please? *puppy dog eyes* =D
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Please? Just one little review (maybe more than that)?? =P
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Would you consent to review song lyrics? My work is "Just Like Love" at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41791.html




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Done!!
Roll up, roll up, two more reviews to keep me busy?

Please? *puppy dog eyes* :D
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Could you look at this for me? There are going to be two more parts to it, but I don't want to post them all at once because that'd be sort of long.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42292.html

Edit: I changed my mind. I have a lot of work to do on that. You can still review it if you want, but it's going to be changed a lot. Sorry!
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Okay then, any more??? =D
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Hey! Can you review this short story for me?

Title: The Elves are Coming
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post492214.html
Word count: Around 615

Thanks!
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This one is very vaguely sci-fi, but only because there is a little bit of time travel in it. It's mostly a love story. If you don't want to review it, though, that's ok. I would appreciate a review on this one though:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36932.html

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All done - two more request spaces open!!

Go on, make me busy :D
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To the death! My novel,
Prologue:
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Chapter 1:
Part 1: topic42563.html
Part 2: topic43068.html
Thanks!
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Done!!
Anymore?? Pleaseeeeeeeee =D
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Will you review my little prelude?
I'll love you forever. :]

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Done, doneeeee!! :D
Keep them coming!!! =D
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