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Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:44 am
lilymoore says...



Well if you aren't busy, I've got something up that could use some looking at. It was for peanut19's "Fearless" contest. Anyway, it's very very very short.


My First and Final Escape
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.





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Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:56 am
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Lily ~Yours is done, any more?
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 6:19 pm
Hannah says...



^_^ Would you mind looking over my newest story? It's called Monday! I have two pieces of it up so far, and I'd mostly like to get a review on the second piece, but the first piece is very short, so I'll just link you to both! ^_^ Thank you so much~

[i] : topic45437.html

[ii] : topic45471.html

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Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:28 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Hannah - I happily oblige to reviewing two pieces, you can ask for as many as you like. xD
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 9:33 pm
imapoemperson says...



I am really not sure about this peice, and i'd appreciate a review. :)
topic45481.html

thanks!
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:57 pm
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I've done your first one, Hannah.
Imapoemperson, I'm working on yours presently and Hannah's too.
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:10 pm
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are you still going to do mine?
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Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:12 pm
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If your willing, and because I really enjoy your style of review, you could review another one of my stories, which is a bit longer then my other ones (like 1050 words).


anyway: HERE!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.





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Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:34 pm
Lord Anzius says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html
the mansion ch 3
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:55 am
Eliza:) says...



Would you please review my prologue, Disaster?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post533225.html#533225
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:49 pm
wiccaryan says...



I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:24 am
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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