A review from one upon whom lies a desire to please.

Well if you aren't busy, I've got something up that could use some looking at. It was for peanut19's "Fearless" contest. Anyway, it's very very very short.


My First and Final Escape

Lily ~Yours is done, any more?

^_^ Would you mind looking over my newest story? It's called Monday! I have two pieces of it up so far, and I'd mostly like to get a review on the second piece, but the first piece is very short, so I'll just link you to both! ^_^ Thank you so much~

[i] : topic45437.html

[ii] : topic45471.html

<3 Hannah

Hannah - I happily oblige to reviewing two pieces, you can ask for as many as you like. xD

I am really not sure about this peice, and i'd appreciate a review.
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thanks!

I've done your first one, Hannah.
Imapoemperson, I'm working on yours presently and Hannah's too.

are you still going to do mine?

If your willing, and because I really enjoy your style of review, you could review another one of my stories, which is a bit longer then my other ones (like 1050 words).


anyway: HERE!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html
the mansion ch 3

Would you please review my prologue, Disaster?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post533225.html#533225

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

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