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I decided it was about time I created a new thread, seeing as the old one is rather long.

I review anything, anything at all.

I have recently being reviewing more poetry than fiction, but I do enjoy reviewing fiction too.

An example of a poetry review on Evi's skies descending
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I enjoy philosophy and so will probably make my own philosophical assumptions of your meaning and ideas within your piece.

Anyway, I'm off to do some reviews,


Request, now, ;)

~Me 8)
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First chapter. Please be as harsh as possible about everything, but mainly about the characters. Thanks! :D
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If you could reviewThe Bedside Reminder it would be great. I would love to get a philisophical view on it. Thanks.
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Workin' on both of them presently. ;)
Any more, as Fridays tend to be my night of staying up until four in the morning writing and reviewing pieces on YWS. xD
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I would love it if you read my new short story, The Truth of the Matter. It's my first attempt at a story like this and I would love some pointers.




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Jon, I've done the first part of your review, and I shall do you a quick run over the rest later.

Working on everyone else's.

Edit: Dr. Atl's is done.
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please review!

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Wooster ~ I've done yours, it's not particularly harsh, more very nit-picky, not grammar-wise though, as the grammar was perfect.

imapoemperson ~ I'm workin' on yours.

Any more ?
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imapoemperson ~ yours is done.
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Hello,

I was wondering if you would kindly review this piece:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45220.html

Thanks so much!
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
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Um....I don't want to seem, well, crabby but, did you ever get around to examining my piece. If you haven't its ok. If there are any issues, just PM me.
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Lilymoore - Sorry, I didn't even notice yours! I shall review it though. Expect it for tomorrow as I'm going to a concert tonight with my friends and won't be back until about midnight.

yrclever - Same as Lilymoore ^-^

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Awww, its no biggy. I was just very confuddled. And its not even that I'm looking for a detailed review, its that I would love to get a detailed opinion of it...if thats ok of course.


But thank you!
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All finished.
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