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Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!

Hey, asxz! What a cool idea... I'll definitely keep up with that.

Thanks for posting!

I'm looking for some critiques on this piece (Ownership, non-fiction) before I edit.

Please and thank you!

Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

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Thanks again!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Poppity!! I have a request for ya! My "horror" story I've gotten a couple of good reviews on it. But, I'd really like to know how to improve my flow. For some reason, it seems choppy to me...so, if you could just help me fix that for my rewrite? Thanks, darling!
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