Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques

TL - finished with your first request
Mistress - almost done
kissthewitch - working on it

hey, anti-pop

can you review this for me?

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it's fantasy.

Mistress - done with chapters 1 and 2!
kissthewitch - it'll be done soon!
niccy - I'll get to it

anti-pop,

could you be a dear and review the re-write of the prologue? it's called Addicting Poison now.

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thanks.

P.s: forget that request to review the fantasy one. i had it locked.

I have part 2 of something I think you already read the first part to. A Bird In Katie's Head: here's the link. topic41879.html
Thanks,
--Vox

kissthewitch - finished. Very nice, kw!
niccy - done! I love it!
TL - [s]working on it as we speak.[/s] Aw, man. Locked? >.< I was almost finished lol.

I'm slowly but surely catching up. *sigh*

Mistress - accidentally did vox's first, so yours will be done ASAP.
Voxina - finished! Nice work.

Mistress - done! Much improvement!
Rosey - done! Good luck in the contest!

C'mon, people! I need to get reviewing! This helps motivate me more!

*twiddles thumbs*

Hi could you review some of my work? There's three parts to the story, i mainly want the last two parts reviewed but they might not make much sense if you haven't read the first bit. They're not too long, thanks so much!
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Anti, could you review this one?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39033.html

Many thanks!

Hello, Review please!

Prologue
Chapter 1 part 1
Chapter 1 part 2

Rip 'em to shreds and post A.S.A.P

Thank you so much, I desperately need to know if anyone likes it!!!

Pippiedooda & Rosey - done! Nice job, both of you!
Stori & asxz - Should be done by today.