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Glauke
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Fri May 02, 2014 6:05 am
Glauke says... · Fri May 02, 2014 6:05 am
I would be so grateful if you could take a look at one or both of my newest poems:

Untitled No. 1
absolution

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. :)

Thanks so much!
❁❁❁

be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining




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deleted30
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Fri May 02, 2014 3:21 pm
deleted30 says... · Fri May 02, 2014 3:21 pm
Sorry if it takes me a while to get to these works. I'm a bit busy right now. I'll definitely try to as soon as I can! :D




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deleted30
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Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:31 am
deleted30 says... · Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:31 am
Reviving this thread cuz I need to review some things. Please give me stuff! :D




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Dest
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Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:41 am
Dest says... · Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:41 am
Could you review the first three chapters of my story (sorry, if that's a lot) Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1?




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deleted30
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Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:46 am
deleted30 says... · Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:46 am
I'd be happy to, @Dest! :D

*goes off to review*




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TinkerTwaggy
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Sun Mar 26, 2017 1:03 pm
TinkerTwaggy says... · Sun Mar 26, 2017 1:03 pm
C.B. - Episode 000 ← @Lucrezia Here comes a wild review request! Just wrote this piece yesterday and got a few reviews on it already, but I need as many different opinions as possible, so here's to hope your schedule allows yours to fly by as well!
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."




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Dracula
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Mon Apr 03, 2017 9:40 pm
Dracula says... · Mon Apr 03, 2017 9:40 pm
Untitled (Zombie Apocalypse Romance Short) this maybe? Thank you!
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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shima
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Thu Apr 06, 2017 7:27 pm
shima says... · Thu Apr 06, 2017 7:27 pm
Would like for you to review my "story"/letter - Letter to a dead girl.




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Aaraju
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Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:01 pm
Aaraju says... · Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:01 pm
Hi. I really wanted an honest review for my article. The link is:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Aaraju/An-Unfulfilled-Dream-135138

Thank you very much.




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Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:40 pm
deleted30 says... · Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:40 pm
@Tortwag
@Dracula
@shima
@Aaraju
@CarryOnMrCaulfield

Hey guys!

Sorry that I never reviewed your stuff; I took a hiatus from the site a little while before you posted your links, and at the time that I vanished, I only had one recent post in this thread and wasn't expecting any more (boy, was I wrong!). Anyway, since I'm currently in between jobs (or in other words, an unemployed bum), it seems like a good time for me to get to work reviewing! *cracks knuckles* I hope that's okay.

TL;DR: I didn't see these posts till just now, and I will be belatedly reviewing all of them ASAP. Sorry for the delay! :smt001




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TinkerTwaggy
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Sun Aug 06, 2017 12:15 am
TinkerTwaggy says... · Sun Aug 06, 2017 12:15 am
@Lucrezia Why yes! Of course it's okay! The delay is... Well it's not fine, but Life is Life, so, I'm fine with the hiatus. At the very least, I hope you'll enjoy yourself with all of these! Good luck :3
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."




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deleted30
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Sun Aug 06, 2017 1:38 am
deleted30 says... · Sun Aug 06, 2017 1:38 am
Tortwag wrote:@Lucrezia Why yes! Of course it's okay! The delay is... Well it's not fine, but Life is Life, so, I'm fine with the hiatus. At the very least, I hope you'll enjoy yourself with all of these! Good luck :3

Thanks for understanding! And I just completed your review. :D




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Sat Jan 20, 2018 8:32 pm
camusic says... · Sat Jan 20, 2018 8:32 pm
Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill I promise it's not gorry! I personly hate reading that kind of stuff... and don't worry about being nice when reviewing this. No feelings will be hurt I promise.
Thanks in advance.

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