Hi! You've already reviewed my first chapter, but right after you reviewed it I had an epiphany. I decided to fix my first chapter, add a scene, remove all flashbacks from chapter 1 and write a prologue. I would love it if you could re-review chapter 1 and review my prologue. Thank you so much and your previous review did not go to waste because you helped me figure lots of stuff out when I was fixing my first chapter. New Haven: Prologue
Ah, hello. I saw you mentioned you would keep up with novels... As you've already reviewed Chapter 1.1 of this novel, would it be any trouble to request a review on In the Absence of Stars - 1.2?
Hi! I am new to YWS and have just posted my first poem on this site. I would be infinitely grateful for a review, if you don't mind! Here's the link--> I'm Only 18 Thank you!! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
Hey there! I would really appreciate it if you could review my satire for me! The Creativity Epidemic It is the first satire I have written and I could use some feedback! Thanks! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes
