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MooCowPoop
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Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:57 pm
MooCowPoop says... · Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:57 pm
Hello ArcticMonkey Can you review my story: Don't Smile

If you have time, can you take a peek at this one too: Zombies Don't Jump...

Sorry if I didn't follow the rules with this post. I wasn't sure how to put in the other story.




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Sins
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Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:46 pm
Sins says... · Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:46 pm
The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

RIP IT TO SHREDS (please)

I think imma post the next chapter soon, you see, but I don't want to do that until this chapter's been destroyed to my satisfaction.

Thank$ dawg
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Roundsquare
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Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:11 pm
Roundsquare says... · Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:11 pm
Hi there here's the first chapter of my story for your evaluation. Enjoy ad feel free to criticize!! The Fading - Chapter One
“Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him....”




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ArcticMonkey
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Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:03 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:03 pm
Done, who's next?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.




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jeanluc
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Pompadour
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Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:05 pm
Pompadour says... · Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:05 pm
I'd really appreciate a review on this:

Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title)

Thanks! :D
How to format poetry on YWS

this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings




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Liaya
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Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:33 pm
Liaya says... · Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:33 pm
I have no idea how this works (I'm not real computer savvy) so I guess this is technically a test run. This is (hopefully) the link to the prologue of my ongoing novel and I really need as much feedback as possible on the entire thing. I'm not on a lot to just surf and find pieces to review, but if anyone wants me to review something for them send me a message and I will be happy to do so!

House of Whispers: Prologue




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Milanimo
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ArcticMonkey
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Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:05 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:05 pm
Doneee :) Who be next?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.




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ANADIR
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:31 pm
ANADIR says... · Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:31 pm
Cool! Here are two short stories :D

Battle Arena 1; Exciting Short Story: Wake From This Nightmare!

Battle Arena 1; Exiting Short Story: So, What Would You Do for Magic?

thanks!!
Is it not human nature to want what we cannot have, and yet manage to overlook the blessings piled upon us?




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LordGreenleaf
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 9:26 pm
LordGreenleaf says... · Thu Jul 31, 2014 9:26 pm
If you could review my poem, that would be great. It's called Perfect paper people.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=114225
Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. - Jim Carey




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R0nnie
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 9:46 pm
R0nnie says... · Thu Jul 31, 2014 9:46 pm
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ArcticMonkey
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Sat Aug 02, 2014 12:21 am
ArcticMonkey says... · Sat Aug 02, 2014 12:21 am
Done, done, and done! :) Anyone else?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.




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GreenLight24
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Mon Aug 04, 2014 7:33 pm
GreenLight24 says... · Mon Aug 04, 2014 7:33 pm
Hi there. I recently posted the first chapter of a mystery/suspense novel I'm starting. It's been like three days and I haven't gotten a single review lol. This is the first time this has happened. But yeah, if you get a chance, I'd love a review on this. :D

Dodger Chapter 1: Reflection
"My Wellspring of Wisdom told me so!"

-Victorique De Blois, Gosick.




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ArcticMonkey
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Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:45 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:45 pm
Doneeee! Next?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.

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