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Hey I was hoping you could review my work! It's the first thing I've written on here and I wondered if it is actually any good! This would be so helpful

Here it is:
work.php?id=100823

Thank you

Done, rachael! And welcome to YWS!

Anybody else?

could you do mine? work.php?id=100845

Done!

Anybody else?

I would really appreciate a review from you!

work.php?id=100932

I have only begun here, and already I find myself in an active community. This is great. That's somewhat of a tangent, but just know I'm excited. And I'd love for you to read a short poem I wrote - it's a little... er, dense is a good word for it. But I think relatively good. Let me know!

work.php?id=100955

done champ and skorlir! Hope you enjoyed! ^_^

Who's next?

EXAMS ARE OVER!

This is reopened once again, [23-06-13]

Please, request away!

Mad Hatters

Thank you! ^^

Looks like I came to the perfect place for these.

A Short Story: A Last Sight.

A lyrical poem: Honour.

P.s. If you have anything of yours you want reviewed, just tag me.

Done, done, done, and done! o oxford comma)

Who's next?

Yoyoyo, Arctic 2 da Monkee

Could you please check out the first chapter of my novel? The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Thanking you!

Done Skins ^^

Who else wants a review? x3

Hey Arctic! Would you mind reviewing my short story for me? The Graveyard

Hey, if you don't mind, would you please review this for me? The Cabin Boy Chapter One
I have been working on it for awhile and be as honest as you can. Thanks!