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Hello ArcticMonkey Can you review my story: Don't Smile

If you have time, can you take a peek at this one too: Zombies Don't Jump...

Sorry if I didn't follow the rules with this post. I wasn't sure how to put in the other story.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

RIP IT TO SHREDS (please)

I think imma post the next chapter soon, you see, but I don't want to do that until this chapter's been destroyed to my satisfaction.

Thank$ dawg

Hi there here's the first chapter of my story for your evaluation. Enjoy ad feel free to criticize!! The Fading - Chapter One

Done, who's next?

I'd really appreciate a review on this:

Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title)

Thanks!

I have no idea how this works (I'm not real computer savvy) so I guess this is technically a test run. This is (hopefully) the link to the prologue of my ongoing novel and I really need as much feedback as possible on the entire thing. I'm not on a lot to just surf and find pieces to review, but if anyone wants me to review something for them send me a message and I will be happy to do so!

House of Whispers: Prologue

Hi!
Could you review my work? I just posted it!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=114152

Doneee Who be next?

Cool! Here are two short stories

Battle Arena 1; Exciting Short Story: Wake From This Nightmare!

Battle Arena 1; Exiting Short Story: So, What Would You Do for Magic?

thanks!!

If you could review my poem, that would be great. It's called Perfect paper people.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=114225

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Done, done, and done! Anyone else?

Hi there. I recently posted the first chapter of a mystery/suspense novel I'm starting. It's been like three days and I haven't gotten a single review lol. This is the first time this has happened. But yeah, if you get a chance, I'd love a review on this.

Dodger Chapter 1: Reflection

Doneeee! Next?