Want a really harsh review?

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I only want you to review the prologue for now. Seeing as how I'm redoing the entire story and haven't had a chance to update the other parts.

Thank you. (I REALLY need help with this piece)
~Berlyn Rae

This is my first chapter to Ghost of Theater Two
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if you wouldn't mind
~Thanks
Berlynn Rae

And here is chapter two!
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thanks

Hey I'mhero,
can you review this please work.php?id=96765
and please make it harsh...i just need to know where it stands

I would like the harshest review you can possibly serve for this messy little work of fiction I am thinking of submitting to a contest. Attack it in whatever ways you feel are justified- fire at will! I await whatever bombshells you can throw at me with anticipation.

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Thanks so much my dear fellow human being.

-The Nameless

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got two short stories for you, lets see what you can do.

Hey guys, sorry all the post I haven't got to will be gotten, maybe not big post because I am very busy and I am trying my best, thanks though and sorry if your offended.

Hey Hero!

Having recieved helpful reviews from you in the past, I back to pester you.

Do you remember Tasia?

From the prologue and chapter one: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95999

And chapter two: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96633

If so, disregard those past two links. If not, there's where I'm coming from, when I present: Chapter Three- in two parts!

Part one is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
and
Part two is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

Thanks so much!

~Shady

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Do your worst, Love.

Hey everyone, I really hate to do this but i simply cannot find enough time in my day to accept the short novels and chapters. I honestly hate undermining the amount of your work by not even reading the work. There is honestly just so much effort that I cannot do justice. You guys should remember that I am a devolving writer myself and my review for them may NOT be a very informed one due to the fact I never wrote one myself.

I am better at poetry. I can take them apart for you and my impressions are so much better than other prompts and so I have decided to stick with poetry and very poetic prompts.

Please remember: I will do poetic prompts (& short stories that are relatively short.)


Sincerely, Hero

Hero, could you review this for me? work.php?id=97088

or this? work.php?id=97062

Done, thanks for choosing me as a reviewer.

Hey,

Can I get a review on this please,

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