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Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am

Sonder says... · Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am

crossing thresholds-

(this world is wide and wonderful)

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Goal: 30 poems by the end of the month. Preferably, one per day. Comments welcome, but conversations are for walls/ PMs. Thanks for reading!

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am

Sonder says... · Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am

Sonder says... · Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:50 pm, edited 3 times in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am

alliyah says... · Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am

Sonder! I really like these first two pieces. Your formatting is so neat and polished and the word choice is somehow just the right blend of academic/scientific and poetic.

This phrasing was beautiful:
"you gesture vaguely to the turbid galaxies roiling above overwhelmed"
I love how nonchalant that is and yet the turn to "overwhelmed" at the end.

you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now

but i have promised to return

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Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am

Sonder says... · Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am

Sonder says... · Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 07, 2018 6:12 pm

Sonder says... · Sat Apr 07, 2018 6:12 pm

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:22 pm

Sonder says... · Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:22 pm

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am

Sonder says... · Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am

Sonder says... · Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:21 am

Sonder says... · Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:21 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:41 am

Sonder says... · Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:41 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:35 pm

Sonder says... · Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:35 pm

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:10 pm

Sonder says... · Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:10 pm

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:27 am

Sonder says... · Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:27 am

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"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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