Haiku Train

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falls forward and spills
all of dusk's fading grief in-
to a sea awe-ringed.

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orange sorta rhymes with awe-ringed, right?




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to a sea awe-ringed
i hold your fleece-covered hand
touch and love my body

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No sexual innuendos or overtones here, but sorry if it sounds like it. I have no intention of making it sound "dirty".
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(Hm... now I have to use that last line as well... hm...)

Touch and love my body;
Our breath shivers like starlight's
Glittering fires
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Glittering fires,
a cold night in the valley
by the rushing stream.
she/her




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By the rushing stream
Swallows yawn and loudly sigh
Like old stars resting
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Like old stars resting
Then bursting with a great BOOM
A supernova
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a supernova
shatters into a million
shards of starry skies
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shards of starry skies
shards to scarry ties of wood
please don't kill the tree!




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Please don't kill the tree
Not many are left, please don't;
Remember the birds
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Remember the birds
Who soars with majestic wings
The guard of the sky
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The guard of the sky
Lifts whispers and shields and spears
To battle storm clouds
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To battle storm clouds
Bring a sunny sword and shield
And fight through your way!
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And fight through your way;
the broken memories of
the past burden you
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude




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the past burdens you.
i see when your shoulders hunch
again; you're weighed down
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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again you're weighed down
the scale of justice has answered
you are a sinner
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People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage