Haiku Train

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Kelisot
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Reviews 37
Wed May 25, 2022 11:21 am
Kelisot says... · Wed May 25, 2022 11:21 am
Water to blood clots
Bursting a sanguine river
Water that ran dry
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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NewHope
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Wed May 25, 2022 11:44 am
NewHope says... · Wed May 25, 2022 11:44 am
Water that ran dry
Like a fox out of a river
Glittered on the plants
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
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Kelisot
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Wed May 25, 2022 12:07 pm
Kelisot says... · Wed May 25, 2022 12:07 pm
Glittered on the plants
Are the white fallen sinew-snow
Ashes of the slain
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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NewHope
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Wed May 25, 2022 1:16 pm
NewHope says... · Wed May 25, 2022 1:16 pm
(Interesting metaphor!)

ashes of the slain
locked up and thrown away in
to old school lockers
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
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clarevelyn13
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Wed May 25, 2022 1:46 pm
clarevelyn13 says... · Wed May 25, 2022 1:46 pm
two old school lockers
side by side and down the hall
makes for two best friends
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Kelisot
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Wed May 25, 2022 2:07 pm
Kelisot says... · Wed May 25, 2022 2:07 pm
makes for two best friends
with magical fairydust
today is the best
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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NewHope
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Wed May 25, 2022 3:44 pm
NewHope says... · Wed May 25, 2022 3:44 pm
"Today is my best,"
says the flood of written words
as it chases love.
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
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Kelisot
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Wed May 25, 2022 4:02 pm
Kelisot says... · Wed May 25, 2022 4:02 pm
as it chases love
god commands death to our love
we are in danger
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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NewHope
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Wed May 25, 2022 4:31 pm
NewHope says... · Wed May 25, 2022 4:31 pm
We are in danger
Like kids chased by packs of cards
As if gambling calls
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Valkyria
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Wed May 25, 2022 5:28 pm
Valkyria says... · Wed May 25, 2022 5:28 pm
As if gambling calls
I give a sinful smile.
Open the first hand
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
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Kelisot
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Reviews 37
Thu May 26, 2022 2:18 am
Kelisot says... · Thu May 26, 2022 2:18 am
Open the first hand
A red king and a black ace
It is a blackjack
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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NewHope
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Thu May 26, 2022 3:35 am
NewHope says... · Thu May 26, 2022 3:35 am
It is a black jack,
Jack knife to the stomach, oh,
Those hard heavy blues
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
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clarevelyn13
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Thu May 26, 2022 3:46 am
clarevelyn13 says... · Thu May 26, 2022 3:46 am
Those hard heavy blues
Crash into me as ocean waves.
Cut right to the core.
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Liminality
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Thu May 26, 2022 3:48 am
Liminality says... · Thu May 26, 2022 3:48 am
Cut right to the core,
plump crow, with the strong black beak
on shiny apples.
she/her
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NewHope
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Thu May 26, 2022 3:57 am
NewHope says... · Thu May 26, 2022 3:57 am
Of shiny apples
That have slid across my hand
And fell to grass dew
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
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